Sep 5, 2011

Straightaway

Joining Haiku-Heights' haiku-a-day September challenge now with the prompt of kiss. Better late than never, as with this little poem! ; )

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Straightaway I'd kiss
that mouth and press my body
too, for I've waited!

12 comments:

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Phew, a kiss is a wonderful thing!

Heaven said...

straight forward ... I like this kiss ~

Christine said...

that long awaited kiss, enchanting

Judithwesterfield said...

Love the rhythm that matches the words in your haiku

poetry-diary.com said...

I can feel the desire in this.

imnotaverse said...

Playful haiku :)

Cheryl said...

So much intensity here. Just perfect.

Susie Clevenger said...

leaving no doubt as to what is wanted :) nice haiku

beccagivens said...

I love the inspirations of the Kiss prompt -- nicely done!!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Waiting for a kiss can be excruciatingly painful!

Kisses here and here and here

Yamini Meduri said...

nice :)

waiting is exciting...as i experience :)

Leo said...

You do seem hungry for that kiss, Christine ;) :D