Aug 26, 2010

Raise Up, Reach

Raise up, reach, young trees
Let your canopies unfold:
Skies alone hold you!

















Thank you to Jingle for the beautiful award!
This was written for Thursday Poets Rally.

28 comments:

kavisionz said...

There couldn't have been words any more perfect than these for a butterfly!!!
Lovely!!! I love butterflies, and I had written a haiku for them myself... :)

Totally loved yours!!!
Happy Rallying! :)

Jingle said...

super cute,
yes, I will link you in,
:0

Jingle said...

perfect words,
your post makes me smile!
:)

wondrinsoul said...

love love love the haiku! sometimes the fewest words mean the most :)

lovelyannie79 said...

i love haiku! and yours is wonderful!

Christine said...

Thank you for your comments and encouragement! The Rally rules!

frayedges said...

I love the Haiku! great imagery.

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

Lovely Haiku I love doing them myself. I wanted to wish you a happy Birthday!

Heartspell said...

Sweet words in the trees. Heartspell

Amanda said...

These words spoke to my heartxx Thank you x

Rosidah Abidin said...

Congrats on the award! Lovely haiku to present it :). Have a wonderful weekend.

Thoughtsnotlost said...

Love this! Such a great sentiment. Thank you for commenting on my blog as well.

Victoria Ceretto-Slotto said...

Excellent haiku--I love that form.
Victoria

Anky0112 said...

wow...
sweet haiku.... keep it up :)

autumnraven said...

I love this...especially the last line.

arspoetica said...

love that last line :) beautiful.

Leo said...

ah, Christine.. this is just wonderful haiku :D well said..!

my entry for the rally is The Butterfly Lover :)

Christine said...

Thank you so much for all of your encouraging comments and insights! And to Jingle, who invited me into one amazing community!

tasithoughts said...

Enjoyed this thoroughly!

JP

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/30/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-awards/

Happy Monday,
5 awards 4 u, enjoy!

simply open a page titled awards, display them, feel proud...
the first 3 awards are not to be passed on,

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/08/sunday-news-flash-plus-awards/

community awards plus Rally information!
Happy Tuesday!

misslaing said...

I'm impressed with the mental picture you were able to create in so few words. Thanks for sharing!

Christina said...

Nice work - both joy and vitality in an economy of words.

Christine said...

Thank you all for your wonderful, thoughtful comments.

Jingle said...

have a fun day!
hope to see you in the Rally tomorrow.

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/09/11/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-28/

award notice.
Thanks for the contribution!
Happy Friday!

you can still attend the Rally if you want to.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/sweet-princess-award-4-female-community-members/#comment-18296

awards for you.

support us by linking in 1 to 3 poems to our poetry potluck…

not necessarily related to the theme, any old poems would work.

Lilly said...

"let your canopies unfold"...love that line...:)