Nov 18, 2010

Haiku Trio

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Initiation:
we get to the business of
putting down our roots.

Be open, tender,
Clean and wise; sheltering strong
Explorable you!

On spring sheets, our feet
Knees thighs hips bellies mouths eyes
Align and align.


I've been gone a while but am happy to return to blogging w/ Jingle's Poets Rally! I wrote this trio some time ago but today feels nice for breaking it out. Happy Rally, everybody.

15 comments:

Eric Alder said...

Nice haiku.

I really liked that last one - it's clever!

Jingle said...

love it,
it is refreshing to me,
Thanks for the contribution to poets rally.

lynnaima said...

Nice, I am so not good with Haiku!

liv2write2day said...

Enjoyed all three of these. I'm becoming addicted to reading and writing haiku.

http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/jingles-poetry-rally-thanksgiving/

jessicasjapes said...

I like the 'align and align' image at the end. Nicely written!

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/dark-severance/

me_duress said...

The art of haiku still scares me - nicely done!!

Christine said...

Thanks, friends; so nice to hear from you all! :-)

Purvi said...

A very neat blog. :)
Liked the first haiku the most. :)

seasweetie said...

The last one was surprising and my favorite!

http://seasweetie.wordpress.com/2010/11/19/bonus-poem-for-this-week/

Sumit Sarkar said...

Lovely haikus :)

Amity said...

I am smiling with the last 'ku'...the aligning of...:-) so clever and witty you are Christine!

jamieDedes said...

Here from Jingle to wish you "Happy Birthday!" Christine, and to read your poem.

Wonderful trio of poems. Welcome back to Rally. Have fun...

frayedges said...

Happy birthday! I come from the Rally.

JamieDedes said...

Hi, Christine!

Here to let you know you are featured here today:
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/03/sunday-rally-dispatch-03062011.html

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