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Initiation:
we get to the business of
putting down our roots.
Be open, tender,
Clean and wise; sheltering strong
Explorable you!
On spring sheets, our feet
Knees thighs hips bellies mouths eyes
Align and align.
I've been gone a while but am happy to return to blogging w/ Jingle's Poets Rally! I wrote this trio some time ago but today feels nice for breaking it out. Happy Rally, everybody.
15 comments:
Nice haiku.
I really liked that last one - it's clever!
love it,
it is refreshing to me,
Thanks for the contribution to poets rally.
Nice, I am so not good with Haiku!
Enjoyed all three of these. I'm becoming addicted to reading and writing haiku.
http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/jingles-poetry-rally-thanksgiving/
I like the 'align and align' image at the end. Nicely written!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/18/dark-severance/
The art of haiku still scares me - nicely done!!
Thanks, friends; so nice to hear from you all! :-)
A very neat blog. :)
Liked the first haiku the most. :)
The last one was surprising and my favorite!
http://seasweetie.wordpress.com/2010/11/19/bonus-poem-for-this-week/
Lovely haikus :)
I am smiling with the last 'ku'...the aligning of...:-) so clever and witty you are Christine!
Here from Jingle to wish you "Happy Birthday!" Christine, and to read your poem.
Wonderful trio of poems. Welcome back to Rally. Have fun...
Happy birthday! I come from the Rally.
Hi, Christine!
Here to let you know you are featured here today:
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2011/03/sunday-rally-dispatch-03062011.html
love your blog, your poetry is impressive!
Make a contribution to us today, the collection is to be closed within 24 hours.
Thanks, we value your support. xxx
miss you, welcome back, keep writing.
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