I have loved Haiku's and love to write them too... (Which I constantly do on Twitter as well as the first one on my Poetry potluck is a Haiku)... I liked this one as it painted a picture for me so vividly... nothing comes between me and my love.. Liked it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya Twitter @VerseEveryDay http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
10 comments:
Sounds mean!
sometimes this kind of feelings arise due to frustration.
Very good.
Ooh! Remind me not to mess with you ;)
loved that ATTITUDE :D
spells out "dont mess with me" perfectly :D
Funny but ... this poem was actually inspired by desire. :-)
I have loved Haiku's and love to write them too... (Which I constantly do on Twitter as well as the first one on my Poetry potluck is a Haiku)... I liked this one as it painted a picture for me so vividly... nothing comes between me and my love.. Liked it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter @VerseEveryDay
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
trying to decide should one be frightened or excited...
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/two-lovely-award-4-u/
two awards for you,
have a smiling day!
lovely entry.
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