Sep 7, 2010

You Could Rest

Another fib poem (experimental American haiku, 1 1 2 3 5 8 structure). Written for Jingle's Poets Rally Week 28.




Image: Foxfires at DeviantArt.com
You
Could 
Rest in
Sheltering
Sweet room after room
Of my tender feelings for you!

14 comments:

Jingle said...

lovely image,
apt words.
I am refreshed by your talent!

Christine said...

Thanks, Ji! You're the best!

Jingle said...

you have done outstanding job last week.
I am very thrilled to have you in again!
your poems rock!
have fun!

Leo said...

sweet words and image, Christine :) good one..!

mine for the rally is ~here~

Dasuntoucha said...

Yes...this piece as a whole is quite enchanting.

Someone Is Special said...

So so lovely... I loved your sweet words...

Happy Rally...

Sweet Dish

--Someone Is Special--

Christine said...

Thank you all for your kind and encouraging words: I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. :-) Happy Rally!

Madison said...

Brillaint and simple at the same time, honey. Bot an easy task. Adore.

Anky0112 said...

brilliant haiku... super cute :)

Christine said...

Thank you, Madison and Ankita! I'm so happy to hear from two new Rally friends!

Harshika said...

ah!! nice :)

a beautiful picture too :)

lifeloveandmisery said...

a very nice little image... great poem!

here's mine:
http://lifeloveandmisery.wordpress.com/2010/09/12/collapse/

Christine said...

Thank you. This was one of my favorite fib poems. :-)

Olivia said...

http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html

Hello, friend:

Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…