i brew haiku: You Could Rest

Sep 7, 2010

You Could Rest

Another fib poem (experimental American haiku, 1 1 2 3 5 8 structure). Written for Jingle's Poets Rally Week 28.

Image: Foxfires at DeviantArt.com

You

Could

Rest in

Sheltering

Sweet room after room

Of my tender feelings for you!

13 comments:

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...: lovely image,
apt words.
I am refreshed by your talent!; 9/9/10, 12:47 AM
Christine said...: Thanks, Ji! You're the best!; 9/9/10, 8:01 AM
Jingle said...: you have done outstanding job last week.
I am very thrilled to have you in again!
your poems rock!
have fun!; 9/9/10, 10:23 AM
Vinay Leo R. said...: sweet words and image, Christine :) good one..!

mine for the rally is ~here~; 9/9/10, 12:20 PM
Dasuntoucha said...: Yes...this piece as a whole is quite enchanting.; 9/9/10, 8:02 PM
Someone is Special said...: So so lovely... I loved your sweet words...

Happy Rally...

Sweet Dish

--Someone Is Special--; 9/9/10, 9:42 PM
Christine said...: Thank you all for your kind and encouraging words: I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. :-) Happy Rally!; 9/9/10, 9:45 PM
madison. said...: Brillaint and simple at the same time, honey. Bot an easy task. Adore.; 9/9/10, 9:53 PM
Ankita Singhal said...: brilliant haiku... super cute :); 9/10/10, 7:41 PM
Christine said...: Thank you, Madison and Ankita! I'm so happy to hear from two new Rally friends!; 9/11/10, 5:20 PM
Harshika said...: ah!! nice :)

a beautiful picture too :); 9/11/10, 6:55 PM
Anonymous said...: a very nice little image... great poem!

here's mine:
http://lifeloveandmisery.wordpress.com/2010/09/12/collapse/; 9/12/10, 6:39 PM
Christine said...: Thank you. This was one of my favorite fib poems. :-); 9/15/10, 8:36 AM

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