Sep 7, 2010

You Could Rest

Another fib poem (experimental American haiku, 1 1 2 3 5 8 structure). Written for Jingle's Poets Rally Week 28.




Image: Foxfires at DeviantArt.com
You
Could 
Rest in
Sheltering
Sweet room after room
Of my tender feelings for you!

13 comments:

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

lovely image,
apt words.
I am refreshed by your talent!

Christine said...

Thanks, Ji! You're the best!

Jingle said...

you have done outstanding job last week.
I am very thrilled to have you in again!
your poems rock!
have fun!

Vinay Leo R. said...

sweet words and image, Christine :) good one..!

mine for the rally is ~here~

Dasuntoucha said...

Yes...this piece as a whole is quite enchanting.

Someone is Special said...

So so lovely... I loved your sweet words...

Happy Rally...

Sweet Dish

--Someone Is Special--

Christine said...

Thank you all for your kind and encouraging words: I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. :-) Happy Rally!

madison. said...

Brillaint and simple at the same time, honey. Bot an easy task. Adore.

Ankita Singhal said...

brilliant haiku... super cute :)

Christine said...

Thank you, Madison and Ankita! I'm so happy to hear from two new Rally friends!

Harshika said...

ah!! nice :)

a beautiful picture too :)

Anonymous said...

a very nice little image... great poem!

here's mine:
http://lifeloveandmisery.wordpress.com/2010/09/12/collapse/

Christine said...

Thank you. This was one of my favorite fib poems. :-)