Sep 18, 2010

Exploit's Evidence

Another Wordle prompt from Big Tent Poetry; I also tried a new form this week called an Etheree (thanks for telling me about it, Amanda!). This form uses 10 lines and 1 through 10 syllables, either ascending or descending; it allowed me to use all words in the Wordle.



Exploit's evidence: half-eaten debris
Blurred tongue swarms to embellish answers
Skirt reality, chant garbage
Of our possibilities
But it's temporary . . .
I'm just your dock; a
Straining backbone
Your weight like
A child
Grows.

8 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

'I am just your dock..'

This has so many ramifications....


timeless flies search for fries

magiceye said...

this is so beautiful...

vivinfrance said...

Now you've made me wonder about the exploit with such consequences.

Bing (PinkLady) said...

this is brilliant, christine! i myself didn't know how to go about this prompt. i am truly impressed!

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Jingle Poetry said...

Glad to see you play this,
masterfully done!

Eaton Bennett said...

Love this, very clever use of your set of words. Beautifully penned and fascinating read. :))

Jingle said...

terrific job!

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

Crap Christine this is awesome! you did the wordle and Etheree. You know it can go backwards or forwards 10 down to 1 up to 10?
Very nice work, you're making me jealous!